These are my final 2 contenders for the project- I had an idea for a third one that would fit the "deconstructive" grid criteria, but It was really just not working from the start so I figured not to even include it.
I love these images. I love the style and I think you nailed the integrative and geometric design. Of the two I think I prefer geometric design because it captures multiple aspects of your job that were awful without being overbearing. Great work man.
Both designs are technically awesome and the messages are very clear. Your Illustrator skills are impressive. My only suggestion is on the first design, there is not enough contrast between the "Sink" and "Swim" aside from color. The fact that the S's line up bugs me visually since the kid is flipped but the text is not. I would experiment with flipping the "swim" vertically and/or horizontally to see if it works. Great job though, I really love your style.
These are great!
ReplyDeleteI love these images. I love the style and I think you nailed the integrative and geometric design. Of the two I think I prefer geometric design because it captures multiple aspects of your job that were awful without being overbearing. Great work man.
ReplyDeleteBoth designs are technically awesome and the messages are very clear. Your Illustrator skills are impressive. My only suggestion is on the first design, there is not enough contrast between the "Sink" and "Swim" aside from color. The fact that the S's line up bugs me visually since the kid is flipped but the text is not. I would experiment with flipping the "swim" vertically and/or horizontally to see if it works. Great job though, I really love your style.
ReplyDeleteI really like both of these. I think they're a better version of the Grub Hub ads.
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