i like what you've done since the last critique, especially with the deconstruction pieces. that having been said, i'm really drawn to the pieces that make use of the tube logo. i think the first one is strong in that it uses the logo to talk more specifically about the work you did, but the second one is strong in its simplicity. if you go with the second one, though, i would make sure that the "enjoy your commute" is centered. good work, though. cheers!
I really think the black and white image is very successful. Theres something about this one I really enjoy. I think when looking at this image you would see it in a fashion magazine. I don't think you need to change anything about this image. Good job!
I think the 4th design down, while it's the simplest visually, works the best in terms of communicating a message. I appreciate that you incorporated your own photography into the other pieces, but I don't think it is 100% necessary in this case. I would go with the 4th design and experiment with bending the "London's Transport" and "For bitchwork" along the contour of the red circle, or inside the line of the red circle (perhaps change the text color to white). Also check the centering of "Enjoy your commute" (obligatory anal designer comment)
i like what you've done since the last critique, especially with the deconstruction pieces. that having been said, i'm really drawn to the pieces that make use of the tube logo. i think the first one is strong in that it uses the logo to talk more specifically about the work you did, but the second one is strong in its simplicity. if you go with the second one, though, i would make sure that the "enjoy your commute" is centered. good work, though. cheers!
ReplyDeleteI really think the black and white image is very successful. Theres something about this one I really enjoy. I think when looking at this image you would see it in a fashion magazine. I don't think you need to change anything about this image. Good job!
ReplyDeleteI think the 4th design down, while it's the simplest visually, works the best in terms of communicating a message. I appreciate that you incorporated your own photography into the other pieces, but I don't think it is 100% necessary in this case. I would go with the 4th design and experiment with bending the "London's Transport" and "For bitchwork" along the contour of the red circle, or inside the line of the red circle (perhaps change the text color to white). Also check the centering of "Enjoy your commute" (obligatory anal designer comment)
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