Your color palette is much more consistent which creates these three pieces to be seen as a set.
I think your last piece is supposed to be deconstructive, but I think you could definitely add more text. It seems like these are thoughts that your subject in the right hand corner has and I think it would make more sense to have him have more thoughts. Also I think it'd look more deconstructive, like breaking down the thought process of someone who's in this situation.
Your color palette is much more consistent which creates these three pieces to be seen as a set.
I think your last piece is supposed to be deconstructive, but I think you could definitely add more text. It seems like these are thoughts that your subject in the right hand corner has and I think it would make more sense to have him have more thoughts. Also I think it'd look more deconstructive, like breaking down the thought process of someone who's in this situation.
first, i just want to say that you have a clear aesthetic in your work, and i think it's really nice to look at. your color palette in these pieces is really nice, but the first one feels like it is a bit less saturated and therefore stands out. i think you could easily exhibit these three as a set, but if you were going to do so, i would change the colors in the first one to mesh better with the other two. of the three, i think that the first two are the strongest. i particularly appreciate the colors and dynamism in the second one. overall, i think your ideas are strong and well executed. props!
Your "slave at an early age" is my favorite so far. I really like the composition and the amount of perspective you were able to get, considering how little visual information you are working with. I'm not quite sure you found the best solution for placing your type- I think just putting it in that box in the corner is sort of a cop out or an afterthought. You could engage the type more.
Also, this might be totally against your style, but you could try getting some texture on there- take some fotos of some gritty surfaces, put them together in photoshop, then overlay them on your image with a very light opacity to give it some texture and depth.
I'm glad you found a way to edit through all your pieces and found a set that is both consistent in theme and color as well as visually exciting. To me, the middle one is the strongest because the message seems the strongest and is also constructed the best as well. Great job overall, your illustrative style works very well at adding a sense of playfulness to a very powerful topic.
I love all of your pieces. Very well done, but the second middle is my favorite. The colors are very pleasing and I like that you edited the shoe to look more like a Nike shoe. Your point is very clear and everything flows smoothly. I like how the shapes of each figure are nicely placed and how neat the piece is. I enjoy the typography as well and I don't think you need to put it anymore well. I think it looks good where it currently is. Great job!
I hope you make the second image your final. Your second image is my most favorite. The message is very clear,well developed and put together. I enjoy your color choice with this image. Good job!
I love the changes you made on 'Slave at an early age.' I definitely takes the piece that much further than it was before. The nike symbol is more obvious as well as the anonymous character is more cultural detail. I like that touch.
You could possibly like about bring the overbearing character all the way to the top corner though. It might make him seem that much more powerful.
Your color palette is much more consistent which creates these three pieces to be seen as a set.
ReplyDeleteI think your last piece is supposed to be deconstructive, but I think you could definitely add more text. It seems like these are thoughts that your subject in the right hand corner has and I think it would make more sense to have him have more thoughts. Also I think it'd look more deconstructive, like breaking down the thought process of someone who's in this situation.
Your color palette is much more consistent which creates these three pieces to be seen as a set.
ReplyDeleteI think your last piece is supposed to be deconstructive, but I think you could definitely add more text. It seems like these are thoughts that your subject in the right hand corner has and I think it would make more sense to have him have more thoughts. Also I think it'd look more deconstructive, like breaking down the thought process of someone who's in this situation.
first, i just want to say that you have a clear aesthetic in your work, and i think it's really nice to look at. your color palette in these pieces is really nice, but the first one feels like it is a bit less saturated and therefore stands out. i think you could easily exhibit these three as a set, but if you were going to do so, i would change the colors in the first one to mesh better with the other two. of the three, i think that the first two are the strongest. i particularly appreciate the colors and dynamism in the second one. overall, i think your ideas are strong and well executed. props!
ReplyDeleteYour "slave at an early age" is my favorite so far. I really like the composition and the amount of perspective you were able to get, considering how little visual information you are working with. I'm not quite sure you found the best solution for placing your type- I think just putting it in that box in the corner is sort of a cop out or an afterthought. You could engage the type more.
ReplyDeleteAlso, this might be totally against your style, but you could try getting some texture on there- take some fotos of some gritty surfaces, put them together in photoshop, then overlay them on your image with a very light opacity to give it some texture and depth.
I'm glad you found a way to edit through all your pieces and found a set that is both consistent in theme and color as well as visually exciting. To me, the middle one is the strongest because the message seems the strongest and is also constructed the best as well. Great job overall, your illustrative style works very well at adding a sense of playfulness to a very powerful topic.
ReplyDeleteI love all of your pieces. Very well done, but the second middle is my favorite. The colors are very pleasing and I like that you edited the shoe to look more like a Nike shoe. Your point is very clear and everything flows smoothly. I like how the shapes of each figure are nicely placed and how neat the piece is. I enjoy the typography as well and I don't think you need to put it anymore well. I think it looks good where it currently is. Great job!
ReplyDeleteI hope you make the second image your final. Your second image is my most favorite. The message is very clear,well developed and put together. I enjoy your color choice with this image. Good job!
ReplyDeleteI think your color schemes are awesome. I also think you drawing your text fits much better with the pieces as a whole.
ReplyDeleteI love the changes you made on 'Slave at an early age.' I definitely takes the piece that much further than it was before. The nike symbol is more obvious as well as the anonymous character is more cultural detail. I like that touch.
ReplyDeleteYou could possibly like about bring the overbearing character all the way to the top corner though. It might make him seem that much more powerful.